Zafina of Eden IV Thank you for butchering a good character.
I'm actually an artist unlike some of the other trolls on here, so I'll give you some honest critiques.
-the cape looks fucked up. Seriously, one half of it looks bigger than the other.
-the breasts do not look right. They shouldn't be perky if there's nothing holding it up. And no, don't say that it's a bra of some sort. Because it's not. The attempt at a breastplate was half-assed.
-the shoulder is placed down too low, the shoulderplate nearest to us should be higher.
-thunder thighs, much?
-Jesus, her shoes look like it'd curve her toes up wicked bad.
-dead stare, seriously, it's the most uninteresting, blandest piece of shit I've seen on NG in all of my years of lurking
-the area between the ribs and the butt is gruesomely disproportionate.
-the right calf shouldn't be showing skin
-Apparently you never learned how to shade hair well. Good job.
So, in total, I give this review a 0. Better luck next time! ;DDD